Why I should get a job. I want to get a job so I don't have to ask my parents for money, I also want to help people by walking their dogs. I think if we all walked dogs there would be no point in walking dogs. So thats why im keeping it a secret. I have a plan, if I walk five peoples dogs twice a week i can make more money. But the thing is, if I want to earn more I have to walk more dogs. And along the lines im pretty sure I would have to walk some big dogs. So i'm limiting the dogs to be 15kg’s and under, because im only 12 and I want to stay intact. I think if we all get better jobs we could save the environment. Eg. going door to door handing out no circular news paper signs. And picking up rubbish in christchurch. Also I love dogs and cats so that's why I want to walk them.
Tuesday, February 25, 2020
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Why I should get a job. I want to get a job so I don't have to ask my parents for money, I also want to help people by walking their dogs. I think if we all walked dogs there would be no point in walking dogs. So thats why im keeping it a secret. I have a plan, if I walk five peoples dogs twice a week i can make more money. But the thing is, if I want to earn more I have to walk more dogs. And along the lines im pretty sure I would have to walk some big dogs. So i'm limiting the dogs to be 15kg’s and under, because im only 12 and I want to stay intact. I think if we all get better jobs we could save the environment. Eg. going door to door handing out no circular news paper signs. And picking up rubbish in christchurch. Also I love dogs and cats so that's why I want to walk them.
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Hi James I'm Olivia from Marshland School. I like the way you had a lot of punctuation and involved your parents. Next time you could ask a question Like What job do you want? This reminds me of the time I persuaded my parents to give me pocket money.
ReplyDeleteHi James it sounds like you’ve thought it out quite carefully. Do you have pets at home? Once the lockdown is over you might be able to put your plan into action.
ReplyDeleteMay the 4th be with you all day today lol